THIS is VERY beautiful - it is amazing what one can do with 35 words.......it takes me 35 just to describe scratching my head in befuddlement. Wait! That's only twelve! hee hee. Beautiful poem, Ella.....I love the broken dreams turning into fresh hope and beginning again. Which we all do every single morning......
That picture of the poppy in the rain is one of the loveliest things I've ever seen! Your words are equally gorgeous - well-measured, vibrant and speaking of the vicissitudes with which so many may be familiar.
"fractured light lies in nature's twisted dance" love this so much and this "fresh hope like spring rain washes the memories" Sometimes we need to forget and move on with fresh hope" Great wisdom. I need some refocusing.
THIS is VERY beautiful - it is amazing what one can do with 35 words.......it takes me 35 just to describe scratching my head in befuddlement. Wait! That's only twelve! hee hee. Beautiful poem, Ella.....I love the broken dreams turning into fresh hope and beginning again. Which we all do every single morning......
ReplyDelete"fractured light" reveals, and "fresh hope
ReplyDeletelike spring rain washes" A lively duo
describes your world! A lovely poem.
Does it have a title?
That picture of the poppy in the rain is one of the loveliest things I've ever seen! Your words are equally gorgeous - well-measured, vibrant and speaking of the vicissitudes with which so many may be familiar.
ReplyDeleteThat's one cool photo, Ella.
ReplyDelete"refocus
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Yes! This is just beautifully done.
Love it... ESP lines 5,6,7.
ReplyDeleteAmazing meaning you've packed into those words. I love the optimism of beginning again.
ReplyDeleteI love this cleansing message. Fresh starts are always bathed in water and breeze. Your first and third lines are my favorites.
ReplyDeleteOh, Ella...you KNOW this reaches deeply...such beautiful thoughts my sweet sister!! I LOVE every word!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and hopeful...I definitely needed your words today.
ReplyDeleteThe poet's view and the photographer's view, all wrapped up in so few words. Wonderfully done, Ella.
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I like the fresh hope and beginning anew ~ Lovely share Ella ~
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed in an economy of words, Ella.
ReplyDeleteIt is a wonder what light can do. (｡◕‿◕｡)
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like spring rain
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Beautiful!
Ella, your words complement the picture and vice versa. Beautifully said. *smiles*
ReplyDeleteyou put this beautifully! "begin again." the most important thing, to me at least. x
ReplyDeleteGorgeous poem and vision. It is rare to find the beauty in all these things. What a wonderful gift you have.
ReplyDeleteLove your way of looking at the world, Ella!
ReplyDeleteThe renewing rain of fresh hope. Love the imagery.
ReplyDelete"fractured light lies in nature's twisted dance" love this so much
ReplyDeleteand this "fresh hope like spring rain washes the memories"
Sometimes we need to forget and move on with fresh hope" Great wisdom. I need some refocusing.
Just like all of us! Beautiful, Ella.
ReplyDeleteWe all need to refresh.
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Lisa
I don't know how I missed this, it is so beautiful. The picture just adds to it.
ReplyDeleteWhat an uplifting poem! So much in 35 words :-) The photo is icing on the cake. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone! This was an amazing challenge~ It was fun to see what directions we all went in~ :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...I had great inspiration..photo is incredible!