A place to share my thoughts inspired by emotions.
(My Mom collects elephants; I collect words)
I love the idea of words twisting and turning like branches......and that hope is tucked in them.I think you have crystalized the hope of many poets in your last three lines. I would say you definitely DO see beyond the ordinary & express this 'beyond' well with your words!
Thank you Mary! :DI think all poets do!!! I think is why we paint with words and try to get others to see how beautiful the ordinary is! Thank you so much~
yes, love those green veins :)
I LOVE this beautiful poem......"but at night I hear the stars whisper as they fall" - spectacular! and I love "hope tucked in them, like green buds". You DEFINITELY always see beyond the ordinary. Way to be.
Ella, you outdid yourself with this poem! Sherry and I liked some of the same phrases, they gave me shivers of delight :-) You're definitely always above and beyond the ordinary--a treat to read your words each week
Yes, praise for seeing beyond the ordinary, Ella, lots of praise. Luv, K
words, thoughts, as green buds just waiting to grow on the page! Love that.
Just lovely, full of unexpected twists and turns. Loved the bland 'manilla' taking over from vanilla.
Thank you everyone :D