* Copyrighted, Isadora Gruye Photography.
Blackbirds caw and announce the Queen's arrival
tree toads sing in the background
Ruby Queen sits high on her throne
let the games begin
Steel grinds like a stripper
turning the deck's
plated blades as the bullet rotor roars
a war of steel battles darkness and
allusive Ruby Queen
marauders arrive in
a whirr of wings
swooping down
to find treasured gold
Star wars type equipment sweeps
making a dent in the mature flesh
mold and vermin enemies in this war
boys with big toys battle Mother Nature's fury
and hope to win this round
in time for the summer's eve movie
and some matinee gold~
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Ellen Wilson
This is BEAUTIFUL. I love the way it is set on the page and LOVE "in time for the summer's eve movie and some matinee gold". Wow. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteOh, super, Ella. Boys with big toys, indeed!
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I loved this ...
ReplyDeleteLike the way you have turned this into a jousting session, a battle of the Titans with sintered metal on the one hand and Nature's obstinacy on the other.
ReplyDeleteFab visual presentation as well.
Your form is so interesting, and adds a sense of movement to your poem, Ellen.
ReplyDeleteLOVE your opening!!
ReplyDelete"A whirr of wings among the fields of gold
Blackbirds caw and announce the Queen's arrival"
Especially the detail of the crows...love them...can almost hear them...very visual piece...nicely done, Ella!! TT ♥
boys with big toys. ha. The shape resembles a bird in flight as well! Nicely done.
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