Laurie asked us to write about the term, Phantasmagoric!
(Century Dictionary and Cyclopedia)
1. Pertaining or relating to a phantasmagoria; of the nature of phantasmagoria; illusive; unreal.
(Wiktionary)
1. adj. Characterized by or pertaining to rapid changes in light intensity and colour.
2. adj. Characterized by or pertaining to a dream-like blurring of real and imaginary elements.
Marian asked us to write a Cinquain. The cinquain poem, while having the feel and style of Japanese forms like haiku and tanka, was created by American poet Adelaide Crapsey (1878-1914).
Guidelines are:
The cinquain is a five-line poem with the following characteristics, in decreasing order of importance:
- Strict syllable count: 2-4-6-8-2
- Strong title (important with such a tight poem)
- Strong imagery (perhaps, even, an image per line)
- Nature imagery, as in haiku or tanka (though I certainly vary from this!)
- Juxtaposition or a clever “turn” at the end
- Accented stress pattern (1-2-3-4-1) and initial capitalization were both used routinely by Crapsey (and are both present in her poems above) but have been all but abandoned in modern cinquain writing. I have not really focused on meter, but may make that my focus this weekend.
earthworms
find a green home
I need a good manny petty
white roots show at six feet below
up yours
I spy clouds
birds shadow my thoughts
wish for eco friendly view
you shouldn't piss off Mother Nature
finger
golden eyes you
all that glitters is not
born with a silver spoon in mouth
a flame
she looks like a moth
no that is buttermilk
no she is a rare grey-blue bloodhound breed
bug off
All are fun and smart...am partial the the first though;)
ReplyDeleteThank you kkkaty :D
DeleteI had fun, will try again!
I love the little unexpected twist at the end of each cinquain. These are some amazing pics too.
ReplyDeleteI found the pics on Pinterest! A lot of wonderful, fantasy type stuff! I know, I will try again and be more accurate with the guidelines! It was fun~ Thank you :D
Delete*guffaw* these are hilarious and wonderful. maybe i was born in a barn, but i never heard "manny petty" before and that made me laugh almost as hard as "Uranus" in the second. these are phantasmagorical all right!
ReplyDeletei was considering combining these two prompts, too. one never knows, maybe a phantasmagoric cinquain has yet to arrive! oh that is just hilarious even to say.
wonderful, wonderful, Ella. yay!
I have a teenage daughter :D, lol. I know I didn't follow the syllable count on Uranus, but I had to do it, lol! I love this form and will try it again! I had so much fun blurring these two ideas, together! I will do it again ;D Thank you!
DeleteThese are lovely words and pictures ~ My favourite is the last one ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace!
DeleteI didn't quite follow the guidelines, but I knew
I had to go with it! I want to write more :D
Loredana,
ReplyDeleteIt was fun to be assertive and blur the lines a bit! Thank you so much :D
amazing images Ella... you are sounding a bit saucy here today:-)
ReplyDeleteHi Laura,
DeleteThank you ;D
I wrote them late at night
No more like wee hours of morning!
lol yes, I guess I do
Oh my goodness. Ella's EDGE comes out! I love these, and I really really especially love that gorgeous picture of the moths.
ReplyDeleteThank you Fireblossom! Yes, I had to let the real Ella out, lol~
DeleteI know they are beautiful~
Yes, Ella's edge is revealed and she definitely is feeling her oats this weekend. Love it, kiddo......and look at you, combining TWO difficult challenges.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry,
DeleteYeah, I let her out once in awhile, when she isn't recycling garbage, lol. They were both so unique, it was fitting to put them together ;D
These are awesome!! Clever, funny ... thoroughly enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteHi Helen...thank you! I didn't quite match the form. I will have to try again and again, lol :D
DeleteThese are great... and witty... thanks for making me smile, Ella.
ReplyDelete;D You are welcome! Thanks for this unique challenge! It was fun~
DeleteAh such beauty and wit as only you can do Ella. Love them!!
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind :D
DeleteThank you Susie!!!
Very interesting pictures you chose, Ella; and I REALLY like your poems. Beautifully phantasmagoric!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary!
DeleteI do love that word... :D
These are fun Ella! Love 'manny petty' and ' born with a silver spoon in mouth rusted'...ha! The images are stunning too!
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking golden thumb
Deletegolden tongue and then
spoon fed of course ;D
lol
Thank you!
very witty! i, too, love the rusted silver spoon!
ReplyDeletehave a lovely week, Ella!
♥
I so wanted tarnished, but rusted
Deleteworked best~ ;D
Thank you!
It was fun to do...
ReplyDeleteI what to make beautiful ones, next :D
Thank you
Wow, each image went up then lept off the cliff.
ReplyDeleteYes, fell off the edge ;D lol
DeleteYou did such a good job with these. I love the last lines in all of them. Very clever. Enjoyed reading this and enjoyed the pictures you chose to go with each poem. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you Myrna! It was fun to be bold :D
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