My second poem is based on some art-I recently made and submitted. I call it mail art. I thought of the era where letters felt heaven sent, from loved ones during the war. I remember my husband telling me how much my letters meant to him in boot camp, years ago. I called my art eXtra Angels. So, here are two poems. Thank you to the Postal Service and all of its workers for allowing us to receive many cherished memories-gifts year round!
SNOW ANGEL
Arrival flung far n' wide
like white glittered pearls
like white glittered pearls
Moon fish dances in daydream's ripples
once blanket of green held whispers
now blanket
canvas of white
canvas of white
angel tells me
go child
spread your wings
like a butterfly
leave
leave
mysteries for poets
who see worlds in aquamarine
memories n' silver rivers
caressed by wind's breath
eXtra Angel
Ink memories
waltz in mind's music box
singing yellow canary paints
portrait on each page of
day's walk
near our green umbrella
beloved angel gathering berries
in golden bowl
whispers of our strings
like dappling sunshine on the coldest day
your font, your perfume
three words smudged end
edge's daydream
mind's spiral dance transfixed
portal's page opens
our treasured history
our gray gardens
touching
fern near our Tree of Heaven
planting our reunion
I'll wear my brown suit
you'll wear the sky.
©Ellen Wilson
Love 'planting our reunion' in the second poem .. and 'angel tells me go child spread your wings' in the first. Notes made the poetry even more meaningful. Happy Holidays Ella, mend your back.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen! Yes, we all need to release our inner child ;D
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Thank you
Wow, Wow, Wow--one for each poem and another for the two together, vivid in images. I'll wear brown bark, you'll wear the sky, and make us see each reunion longer lasting than snow angels could ever be (but they are so much fun).
ReplyDeleteHi Susan, thank you! I suggested the brown bark..happy you like it!
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I'll wear my brown suit
ReplyDeleteYou'll wear the sky..
Whoosh! What an amazing ending. Both poems are magical, Ella.
I love your whoosh-you made me smile big and laugh! Thank you Kerry!
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I know you would love a gown like the sky~ ;D
I too love the lines that Kerry quoted above ~ My hubby treasured our letters too ~
ReplyDeleteI also enjoyed the snow angels, both pictures & words ~
Merry Christmas Ella to you and your family ~
Oh, Grace so you know this world, as well! Yes, letters are portals and offer us so much hope~
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Beautiful poems, Ella. Love the ending of your second poem especially. I love the idea of 'wearing the sky.'
ReplyDeleteHi Mary! Thank you...me too...I can see the gown now ;D
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I was breezing along enjoying both offerings and then those closing lines "I'll wear my brown suit, you'll wear the sky" just knocked me over. Fantastic!
ReplyDeletetee,hee...yes, it was a surprise ending! Thank you so much Sherry!
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lovely, so very lovely! I love snow angels above all others!
ReplyDeleteditto on all the wonderful remarks! You rock!
I hope we both get to make one this year! ;D
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Happy Holidays to you n' yours
sounds like your first angel is rather wise....smiles...go spread those wings indeed...smiles. the second one is def my fav...esp that close...
ReplyDeleteYes, we all need to remember that inner child-smiles! Thank you so much! Happy Holidays to you n' yours
DeleteThis mail lady thanks you for the shout out to all of us in postal blue!
ReplyDeleteThank you postal blue poet with gypsy wings!
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Two wings of the angel, one gossamer as snow, the other fragrant as a perfume left on a piece of clothing; both delicate and delightful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Blueoran!! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season!
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