I am behind on my poetry challenges.
I decided to give Lolamouse's challenge a chance. She asked us to write a Billy Collins type poem. He is good at flattery and making one walk the dangerous, teasing path. More about Billy's style here.
Collins believes that poetry should be a part of everyday life. He introduced a school program called Poetry 180, an online poetry anthology for teachers to use with their students. It was named for the 180 days of the school year and for the 180 degree turn which Collins wants students to make toward poetry- listening rather than dissecting.(this shared by Miss Mouse)
I decide to also do Margaret's challenge. Her daughter Chelsea provided us with art. I was inspired by another painting, till this poem jumped out at me. I wonder what Chelsea thinks of our poetic view?!
Margaret asked us to write how the art inspired us! "I'm going to ask you to try and create a poem that is based on feelings
rather than what image you may see - try not to see a person or animal,
or a scene. Try to write about how the art makes you feel."
I didn't do this right...so I will attempt the art that attracted me first and try Corey's dialogue prompt-soon!
Magazine clippings, photography
Fragile morning arrives
Gold finch paints
over tarnished mask
Peach blush covers your Earl Grey rain
Tightly stitched rose bud lips hide your evil doll grin
your mirror, mirror approves
of your siren-esque chiseled perfection
co$t of beauty charged
on plastic-for the Queen
© Ellen Wilson
A morning made fragile by that stern mirror ~
ReplyDeleteGood one Ella ~
cost of beauty charged on plastic..
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the angst that accompanies the stress of trying to conform to the so-called norms of modern life.
Kerry-It always haunts me when you see an older Hollywood siren all plastic and fake. There is something to be said for 'aging gracefully' than becoming an plastic doll.
ReplyDeleteGrace-Yes, we all know how light can cast an evil shadow~ Thank you
Ella,
ReplyDeleteUse plastic to pay for looking like plastic-so sad. You did a fantastic job with this work of art.
Thank you Lolamouse!
DeleteI might try another attempt at this poet's style...mine
isn't quite right~
But thank you!
:D
Wow, lots to think about here - well done, Ellie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry!
DeleteI do see my mother these
days, in my mirror ;D
Yes, extremely well done, Ella.
ReplyDeleteK
Thank you Kay!
Delete:D
I had fun writing it~
Not only does it take pain to be a beauty ... it takes $$$$$. I liked this one Ella.
ReplyDeleteYes, this is the reality show I wanna see! Men surviving as women-hair, permed, curls, heels....waxing, tee,hee!
DeleteThank you :D
Oh, this is fabulous! Make up, masks...and what they cover - great write Ella.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary,
DeleteYes, the great pretender!
So glad most of us live in the real world :D
Thank you~
Love the "Gold Finch paint," and "rosebud lips," fragile morning indeed. Written well Ella! :) @>---->---
ReplyDeleteYes, very fragile!
DeleteFake seem to rule in the world of gold
pedestal type birds~
Thank you Hannah!
SS/TT
"Your Earl Grey rain," magnificent. I wrote to the same image, and it's amazing how different (and how much the same) they are.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Ella, good on you! Amy
Hi Amy,
DeleteI know it was cool to read yours~
I felt empowered :D
Thank you~
I know right!!!
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A good capture :)
ReplyDeleteearl grey rain! love that.
ReplyDeleteWell expressed, Ella. It is a shame that even so many young people now are opting for using plastic for plastic. I do prefer natural at every age.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary, it is true and very sad~
DeleteSuggestions and allusions to conjure with. Like this very much.
ReplyDeleteHi Dave
DeleteThank you so much!
Much to conjure with all of those allusions~
;D
Me thinks you are an artist with an artist's eye :) Fragile perfection... I think sums this poem up - and what a magnificent take! Thank you. She had so much fun reading these and I will let her know another was added!
ReplyDeleteThank you Margaret so much!
DeleteSeeing Chelsea's awe inspiring art makes me want to paint again!
@>---------- It was a great challenge! I love how you paint with light!!!